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作文模板与高分句型

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✍️ 作文模板与高分句型

广东普通专升本《公共英语》写作 | 应用文主攻 | 约 100 词


一、基础信息(广东专升本)

项目要求
字数约 100 词(建议实写 90–110)
建议用时25–30 分钟
满分15 分
体裁优先级书信 > 通知 > 其它应用文 ≫ 议论文/图表(广东极少)
评分侧重格式正确 + 要点写全 + 语言通顺 + 结构清楚
署名题目未指定时用 Li Hua(切勿写真名)

考场提醒:

  1. 先把提示要点勾完,再套模板——漏一点就掉内容分
  2. 少堆空话(Taking all these factors... 之类),把字数留给时间/地点/内容
  3. 写完 30 秒检查:称呼、落款、时态、拼写、要点是否全

二、必背模板(按你的原版保留,略作格式整理)

📌 模板 A:万能书信(主背 ★★★★★)

适用: 邀请 / 申请 / 感谢 / 道歉 / 建议 / 推荐 / 投诉等

mermaid
flowchart TB
    A["Dear ______,<br/>(称呼:收信人,未指定写 Mr. Smith)"] --> B["开头段<br/>How is everything going?<br/>I am writing this letter to ..."]
    B --> C["正文段<br/>万能过渡句 + First and foremost<br/>+ Furthermore + Last but not least<br/>(要点全写进这三句)"]
    C --> D["结尾段<br/>Taking all these factors into consideration<br/>I am looking forward to hearing from you soon."]
    D --> E["落款<br/>Yours sincerely,<br/>Li Hua(不要写真名)"]

    style A fill:#2F6B9E,color:#fff
    style B fill:#C0392B,color:#fff
    style C fill:#E67E22,color:#fff
    style D fill:#27AE60,color:#fff
    style E fill:#8E44AD,color:#fff

📌 书信格式四件套:称呼(Dear...)→ 开头(目的句)→ 正文(要点三连)→ 落款(Yours sincerely, + 署名)。格式正确是应用文评分第一关,背熟框架再填内容。

Dear _________ , (收信人,题目未指定则写 Mr. Smith 或 Mark)

How is everything going? I am writing this letter to express my earnest hope to / recommend _________(填入写信目的,如:invite you to our speech contest / apply for the position of English tutor).

Here are some relevant details about this matter.(万能过渡句)First and foremost, _________(填入细节一:如 the deadline is Nov. 10th).Furthermore, _________(填入细节二:如 it is highly beneficial to us).Last but not least, _________(填入细节三或升华句:如 it will be a meaningful and unforgettable experience).

Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope you can _________(填入期许,如:accept my invitation / give me an opportunity).I would be highly appreciative if you could take my request into consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(注意:千万不要写自己的真实姓名)

书信范文(邀请)

Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I am writing this letter to express my earnest hope to invite you to visit the exhibition of Traditional Chinese Culture in our school, and I would like to highly recommend a special activity to you.
Here are some relevant details about this matter. First and foremost, the exhibition will be held next Friday. Furthermore, you can experience the art of paper-cutting yourself. Last but not least, it will be a meaningful and unforgettable experience.
Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope you can accept my invitation. I would be highly appreciative if you could take my request into consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

字数自检: 范文约 100 词量级;若提示里有具体时间/地点,优先补进 First / Furthermore 两句,比堆“meaningful”更稳。


📌 模板 B:NOTICE 通知(主背 ★★★★★)

适用场景: 学校、学生会或俱乐部发布活动通知,如音乐周、运动会、英语演讲比赛等。

(正中间大写) NOTICE

May I have your attention, please? To enrich our campus life, our school is going to organize _________(填入活动名称,如 a music week).

The event is scheduled to be held in _________(填入地点,如 the school hall)at _________(填入时间,如 2:00 p. m. next Friday).There are many exciting activities waiting for you.(万能凑字句)For one thing, _________(细节一:如 you can enjoy pop music).For another, _________(细节二:如 please bring your own instruments).

Those who are interested in it are highly welcome to participate.(高级句型:极其欢迎感兴趣的同学参加)If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us at 1234567.(万能结尾句)

(右下角发通知的组织,如) The Student Union
(右下角发通知的日期,如) Nov. 10th

格式要点:

  • 标题 NOTICE 居中大写
  • 正文写清:活动名 / 时间 / 地点 / 内容 / 欢迎参加 / 联系方式
  • 右下角:组织 + 日期

📌 模板 C:图表 / 社会现象(拓展,广东极少考)

适用场景: 描述社会热点趋势或图表数据,如大学生沉迷手机、网购的流行、低碳出行等。

As is clearly shown in the chart / As we can see in our daily life, the past few years have witnessed a dramatic change in _________(填入现象主题,如 using mobile phones / online shopping).Specifically, this trend is becoming increasingly popular among people.(万能现象补充句)

There are several reasons behind this phenomenon.(引出原因过渡句)First and foremost, _________(填入原因一:如 it is very convenient).Furthermore, _________(填入原因二:如 it saves us a lot of time / we can chat with friends anytime and anywhere).

Taking all these factors into consideration, we can naturally draw the conclusion that _________(填入趋势预测,如:this trend will continue).In my opinion, we should take a rational attitude towards it.(万能高分结尾呼吁:在我看来,我们应该对此采取理性的态度)

⚠️ 备考优先级:低。 广东统招公共英语写作主考应用文;本模板仅作备用,冲刺阶段别占主背时间。


📌 模板 D:正反观点 / 建议类议论文(拓展,广东极少考)

适用场景: 给出两个对立观点让你选择,或者提出一个问题让你给出建议。如:团队合作 vs 独立工作、在校外租房 vs 住校内。

Nowadays, there is a heated debate over _________(填入讨论的话题,如 whether students should work part-time).Opinions vary from person to person.(万能开场:如今关于...有激烈的讨论,人们的观点因人而异)

On the one hand, some people argue that _________(填入甲方观点:如 working part-time is beneficial).They believe that _________(解释甲方观点:如 it provides practical experience).On the other hand, others hold the opposite view.(转折句:另一方面,其他人持有相反观点)They point out that _________(填入乙方观点:如 it takes up too much study time).

As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the former/latter opinion.(表明立场:就我而言,我赞同前者/后者的观点)The reason is that _________(给出自己的理由:如 practical skills are equally important for our future career).Therefore, we should find a proper balance.(万能结尾:因此,我们应该找到一个合适的平衡点)

⚠️ 备考优先级:低。 同上,主背书信 + 通知即可。


三、高频写信目的开头(替换壳,提分用)

功能开头句
邀请I am writing to invite you to...
申请I am writing to apply for the position of...
感谢I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...
道歉I am writing to apologize for...
建议I am writing to offer some suggestions on...
推荐I am writing to recommend... to you.
投诉I am writing to complain about...
通知目的To enrich our campus life, ... is going to be held.
欢迎参加Those who are interested are highly welcome to participate.
期盼I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. / I am looking forward to your early reply.

四、高分小替换(点缀即可,别堆)

低分词可换
importantcrucial / vital / significant / essential
goodbeneficial / positive
badharmful / negative
manya large number of / various
more and moreincreasingly / a growing number of
thinkbelieve / hold / argue
sotherefore / as a result
solveaddress / deal with

常用连接

功能
顺承First and foremost / First of all / Furthermore / Last but not least
因果Therefore / As a result / Thus
举例For one thing... For another... / For example
总结Taking all these factors into consideration / In conclusion

五、写作流程(约 100 词)

Step 1: 审题(2 分钟)——体裁、收信人/组织、要点清单
Step 2: 列点(2 分钟)——目的 1 句 + 细节 2–3 点 + 期许 1 句
Step 3: 套写(15–18 分钟)——直接填模板
Step 4: 检查(3–5 分钟)——格式 / 要点 / 时态 / 拼写 / 字数

秒杀口诀

广东作文约百词,书信通知最对口
要点写全格式对,套话少用细节够
署名只用 Li Hua,写完检查不扣分


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