✍️ 作文模板与高分句型
广东普通专升本《公共英语》写作 | 应用文主攻 | 约 100 词
一、基础信息(广东专升本)
| 项目 | 要求 |
|---|---|
| 字数 | 约 100 词(建议实写 90–110) |
| 建议用时 | 25–30 分钟 |
| 满分 | 15 分 |
| 体裁优先级 | 书信 > 通知 > 其它应用文 ≫ 议论文/图表(广东极少) |
| 评分侧重 | 格式正确 + 要点写全 + 语言通顺 + 结构清楚 |
| 署名 | 题目未指定时用 Li Hua(切勿写真名) |
考场提醒:
- 先把提示要点勾完,再套模板——漏一点就掉内容分
- 少堆空话(
Taking all these factors...之类),把字数留给时间/地点/内容 - 写完 30 秒检查:称呼、落款、时态、拼写、要点是否全
二、必背模板(按你的原版保留,略作格式整理)
📌 模板 A:万能书信(主背 ★★★★★)
适用: 邀请 / 申请 / 感谢 / 道歉 / 建议 / 推荐 / 投诉等
mermaid
flowchart TB
A["Dear ______,<br/>(称呼:收信人,未指定写 Mr. Smith)"] --> B["开头段<br/>How is everything going?<br/>I am writing this letter to ..."]
B --> C["正文段<br/>万能过渡句 + First and foremost<br/>+ Furthermore + Last but not least<br/>(要点全写进这三句)"]
C --> D["结尾段<br/>Taking all these factors into consideration<br/>I am looking forward to hearing from you soon."]
D --> E["落款<br/>Yours sincerely,<br/>Li Hua(不要写真名)"]
style A fill:#2F6B9E,color:#fff
style B fill:#C0392B,color:#fff
style C fill:#E67E22,color:#fff
style D fill:#27AE60,color:#fff
style E fill:#8E44AD,color:#fff📌 书信格式四件套:称呼(Dear...)→ 开头(目的句)→ 正文(要点三连)→ 落款(Yours sincerely, + 署名)。格式正确是应用文评分第一关,背熟框架再填内容。
Dear _________ , (收信人,题目未指定则写 Mr. Smith 或 Mark)
How is everything going? I am writing this letter to express my earnest hope to / recommend _________(填入写信目的,如:invite you to our speech contest / apply for the position of English tutor).
Here are some relevant details about this matter.(万能过渡句)First and foremost, _________(填入细节一:如 the deadline is Nov. 10th).Furthermore, _________(填入细节二:如 it is highly beneficial to us).Last but not least, _________(填入细节三或升华句:如 it will be a meaningful and unforgettable experience).
Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope you can _________(填入期许,如:accept my invitation / give me an opportunity).I would be highly appreciative if you could take my request into consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(注意:千万不要写自己的真实姓名)书信范文(邀请)
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I am writing this letter to express my earnest hope to invite you to visit the exhibition of Traditional Chinese Culture in our school, and I would like to highly recommend a special activity to you.
Here are some relevant details about this matter. First and foremost, the exhibition will be held next Friday. Furthermore, you can experience the art of paper-cutting yourself. Last but not least, it will be a meaningful and unforgettable experience.
Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope you can accept my invitation. I would be highly appreciative if you could take my request into consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua字数自检: 范文约 100 词量级;若提示里有具体时间/地点,优先补进 First / Furthermore 两句,比堆“meaningful”更稳。
📌 模板 B:NOTICE 通知(主背 ★★★★★)
适用场景: 学校、学生会或俱乐部发布活动通知,如音乐周、运动会、英语演讲比赛等。
(正中间大写) NOTICE
May I have your attention, please? To enrich our campus life, our school is going to organize _________(填入活动名称,如 a music week).
The event is scheduled to be held in _________(填入地点,如 the school hall)at _________(填入时间,如 2:00 p. m. next Friday).There are many exciting activities waiting for you.(万能凑字句)For one thing, _________(细节一:如 you can enjoy pop music).For another, _________(细节二:如 please bring your own instruments).
Those who are interested in it are highly welcome to participate.(高级句型:极其欢迎感兴趣的同学参加)If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us at 1234567.(万能结尾句)
(右下角发通知的组织,如) The Student Union
(右下角发通知的日期,如) Nov. 10th格式要点:
- 标题
NOTICE居中大写 - 正文写清:活动名 / 时间 / 地点 / 内容 / 欢迎参加 / 联系方式
- 右下角:组织 + 日期
📌 模板 C:图表 / 社会现象(拓展,广东极少考)
适用场景: 描述社会热点趋势或图表数据,如大学生沉迷手机、网购的流行、低碳出行等。
As is clearly shown in the chart / As we can see in our daily life, the past few years have witnessed a dramatic change in _________(填入现象主题,如 using mobile phones / online shopping).Specifically, this trend is becoming increasingly popular among people.(万能现象补充句)
There are several reasons behind this phenomenon.(引出原因过渡句)First and foremost, _________(填入原因一:如 it is very convenient).Furthermore, _________(填入原因二:如 it saves us a lot of time / we can chat with friends anytime and anywhere).
Taking all these factors into consideration, we can naturally draw the conclusion that _________(填入趋势预测,如:this trend will continue).In my opinion, we should take a rational attitude towards it.(万能高分结尾呼吁:在我看来,我们应该对此采取理性的态度)⚠️ 备考优先级:低。 广东统招公共英语写作主考应用文;本模板仅作备用,冲刺阶段别占主背时间。
📌 模板 D:正反观点 / 建议类议论文(拓展,广东极少考)
适用场景: 给出两个对立观点让你选择,或者提出一个问题让你给出建议。如:团队合作 vs 独立工作、在校外租房 vs 住校内。
Nowadays, there is a heated debate over _________(填入讨论的话题,如 whether students should work part-time).Opinions vary from person to person.(万能开场:如今关于...有激烈的讨论,人们的观点因人而异)
On the one hand, some people argue that _________(填入甲方观点:如 working part-time is beneficial).They believe that _________(解释甲方观点:如 it provides practical experience).On the other hand, others hold the opposite view.(转折句:另一方面,其他人持有相反观点)They point out that _________(填入乙方观点:如 it takes up too much study time).
As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the former/latter opinion.(表明立场:就我而言,我赞同前者/后者的观点)The reason is that _________(给出自己的理由:如 practical skills are equally important for our future career).Therefore, we should find a proper balance.(万能结尾:因此,我们应该找到一个合适的平衡点)⚠️ 备考优先级:低。 同上,主背书信 + 通知即可。
三、高频写信目的开头(替换壳,提分用)
| 功能 | 开头句 |
|---|---|
| 邀请 | I am writing to invite you to... |
| 申请 | I am writing to apply for the position of... |
| 感谢 | I am writing to express my sincere thanks for... |
| 道歉 | I am writing to apologize for... |
| 建议 | I am writing to offer some suggestions on... |
| 推荐 | I am writing to recommend... to you. |
| 投诉 | I am writing to complain about... |
| 通知目的 | To enrich our campus life, ... is going to be held. |
| 欢迎参加 | Those who are interested are highly welcome to participate. |
| 期盼 | I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. / I am looking forward to your early reply. |
四、高分小替换(点缀即可,别堆)
| 低分词 | 可换 |
|---|---|
| important | crucial / vital / significant / essential |
| good | beneficial / positive |
| bad | harmful / negative |
| many | a large number of / various |
| more and more | increasingly / a growing number of |
| think | believe / hold / argue |
| so | therefore / as a result |
| solve | address / deal with |
常用连接
| 功能 | 词 |
|---|---|
| 顺承 | First and foremost / First of all / Furthermore / Last but not least |
| 因果 | Therefore / As a result / Thus |
| 举例 | For one thing... For another... / For example |
| 总结 | Taking all these factors into consideration / In conclusion |
五、写作流程(约 100 词)
Step 1: 审题(2 分钟)——体裁、收信人/组织、要点清单
Step 2: 列点(2 分钟)——目的 1 句 + 细节 2–3 点 + 期许 1 句
Step 3: 套写(15–18 分钟)——直接填模板
Step 4: 检查(3–5 分钟)——格式 / 要点 / 时态 / 拼写 / 字数秒杀口诀
广东作文约百词,书信通知最对口
要点写全格式对,套话少用细节够
署名只用 Li Hua,写完检查不扣分
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